Yeh Script Likh kar teyaar ho chuki hai. Iske 5 Parts likhe ja chuke hain. Meri yeh Script Comedy, Action aur Suspense se bharpoor hai. Yeh Script Ek webseries ke liye likhi gayi hai. 5 Parts me is Webseries ka Season one teyaar hai. Is webseries ke agle Seasons ke har bhaag ke liye Contact karen..........
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Chor A Latest Version Webseries Part- 1
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*Star -
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1]
Abhay
Hero 23 Age
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2] Paayal Heroine 23 Age
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3] Anjuman Hero's Friend 23 Age
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4] Aakash Hero's Friend 20 Age
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5] Aanchal Hero's Sister 19 Age
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6] Nishant Hero's Friend 20 Age
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7] Vishmber Hero's Father 40 Age
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8] Sarojni Hero's
Mother 35 Age
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9] Vishnu Hero's Uncle
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10] FiveCollage Boy Villain
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11] Abhay Faimly
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12]Police Team
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1st Scene
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Lights, Camera, Action-
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Location
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1] Bank 2] Market
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( Abhay bank me gadi ki EMI jama
karvane jata hai. Thodi der me, munh latka kar pareshani se bahar nikal aata
hai. Bahar Bike par uska best friend Anjuman wait kar rha tha. )
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Anjuman
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Kya huaa, munh kyun latka hai tera.
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Abhay
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Yaar pichle mahine bhi papa ki emi ka
cheque bounce hua tha. Is baar bhi cheque bounce hua hai. Ab kya karun.
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Anjuman
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Yaar tere papa ki to bahut badi shop
hai. Aapke bhi cheque bounce hote hain.
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Abhay
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Kya karen, har koi Sale lagakar baith
jata hai. Kamai karen to kaise karen.
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Anjuman
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( Utsukta se puchne lagta hai-)
Teri Shop me sunder ladkiyan to bahut
aati hongi.
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Abhay
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( Itna sunkar hi chehra andar se khil
uthta hai. Fir thodi der ke baad kehne lagta hai- ) Bas….., “Dil ke taron ko mat ched, Bahut dukhte hain. Ki, arz kiya hai….. Dil ke taron ko mat ched, Bahut dukhte hain……. Pukkiyon ki tamnna rakhne vaale ye honth, Saamne aane vali har ladki ko didi-didi ratate hain……. didi-didi ratate hain……. didi-didi ratate hain……. didi-didi ratate hain…….
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Anjuman
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( Chounk kar-) Kya ?
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Abhay
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Meri jagah tum hote to, ye k..ya…. nahin karte.
College jaane vali kai ladkiyyan to mujhe bhaiya ji hi bolti hain. Ye jindgi
me aesa gum hai, jo mera kabhi bhi nahin bhar sakta hai. Chid hoti hai jab
itne handsome golmatolu ladke ko ladkiyan bhaiya ji kehkar pukarti hain tab.
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Anjuman
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To kya tumne aaj tak koi pataai nahin
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Abhay
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Chaar….. Chaar ladkiyan pata chuka
hun.
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Anjuman
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( Chedte huye-)
Tumhari to panchon ungliyaan ghee me,
taange batte par aur sir kadhai me hai. Bahut lucky ho tum. Mujhse to aaj tak
sirf do hi pat paain hain.
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2nd Scene
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Lights, Camera,
Action-
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Location
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1] House 2] Forest
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( Dark Brown ke tite kapde daale aur
full mask se chehre ko dhake, haath me bag liye choron ki tarh koi, Abhay ke
ghar ki devaar faand kar bahar ghad-dhaam se gir jata hai. Abhay ka ghar gaanv
me sunsaan jagh par tha. Kamar pakad kar nakabposh khada hota hai. Baig ko
peeth ke peeche pakad kar, jungle ki tarf chal padta hai. Thode dur ghane
jungle me ek purana ghar tha. Charon aur andhera-hi-andhera chaya hua tha.
Dheere se ghar ka darbaja kholkar ander chala jata hai.
Andhere me baig se nikaalkar bada
chashma laga leta hai, chashme ka batan davata hai..aage Light jal padti hai.
Yahan-vahan dekhta hai, sukhi ghaas ke tinke latak rahe the. Baig se safed
rumaal par davai chidakta hai. Neeche dekhta hai, Bhains jugali kar rahi thi.
Bhains ki naak par rumaal dava deta hai. Bhains yahaan-vahaan sir marne lagti
hai. Abhay kass kar uski gardan pakdne ki koshish karta-karta gir jaata hai,
uthkar fir rumaal se bhains ki naak aur bazu se gardan ko davata hai. Bhains
sir maar-maar kar behosh ho jaati hai. Baig ki jeep kholkar baltu nikalkar, bhains
ko dheere-dheere dohne lagta hai. Chaar ltr dodh, baig me rakhin botlon me
bhar leta hai. Botlen aur balti ko baig me daalkar jeep band karke jeb se
phone nikaalkar search karne lagta hai. Dhoom ki dhun lagata hai. Thodi der
dhoom ki dhunn sunta rehta hai. Fir andhera karke gum ho jaata hai.]
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3rd Scene
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Lights, Camera, Action-
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Location
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1] Collage Room
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( Abhay Collage me sabse peeche apne
do-doston Aakash, Nishant aur Anjuman ke saath, hansta huaa baaten kar rha
tha. Aage baaki ke 700 students baithe the. Ek ladki roti hui andar aati hai.
Students me kisi ko dhundhne lagti hai. Saare Students use dekh kar chup ho
jaate hain. Abhay apne doston ke saath vaise hi hans-hans kar baaten kar raha
tha. Ladki roti hui Abhay ke paas chali jaati hai. Abhay use rota dekhkar
chounk jata hai. Puchta hai- )
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Abhay
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Aanchal…. Kya hua tumhe ? tum ro kyun
rahi ho ?
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Aanchal
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( Rote huye -)
Bhaiya….., meri Seaction ke ladke..,
mujhe ro..roj tang karte hain.
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Abhay
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( Gusse me aa jata hai- )
Tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahin ?
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Aanchal
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( Rote huye -)
Kya batati, ki vo bheed me ya, sabke saamne
mujhe kahan chu rahe hain….. ? kya bataati, ki vo mujhe gannde tount maarte
hain roj, ya ye batati ki vo mujhse jabrdasti kandhe takra-takra kar jaate
hain……
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Abhay
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( Uska munh rone ko ho gaya tha. ) Tu chal, main abhi aata hun.
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( Haan me sir hilati hui, Palat kar
baahar chali jaati hai. Sare Students Abhay ki tarf dekh rahe the. )
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Aakash
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( Gusse me kehta hai- )
Tu darr kyun raha hai, hum hain na.
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Abhay
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( Gardan jhukaye baitha tha. )
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Nishant
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Hum charon agar ek-ek punch bhi
fainkege na, saale tabhi vahin par behosh ho jayenge.
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Abhay
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( Gardan uthakar unki tarf dekhne
lagta hai. Aankhe uskin aansuon me tar chukin thi. Saare claasroom me sannata
cha chuka tha. )
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Anjuman
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Hum hain na, cheer denge saalon ko.
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Abhay
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( Bhari aur kaanpti aavaj me kehta
hai- )
Hum bhi ladkiyon ke saath, aesa hi
karte hain na.
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( Teeno ke munh bnd ho jaate hain. )
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Abhay
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Aaj meri, meri behan ke saath aesa
hua, tab mujhe pata chala, ek bhaai ko kitna bura lagta hai.
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( Abhay bench par, saare Sutdents ke
beecho-beech un paanch ladko ke munh par, mukkon ki jhadi laga deta hai. Unhe
sambhlne ka jara bhi mouka nahin deta hai. Bhari aankhon se, sabke naak aur
munh tod raha tha. Fir ek-ek ko kheench-kheench kar mukkon se todne lagta
hai. Kabhi ek ko maar raha tha, kabhi dusre ko to kabhi panchve ko. Students
darkar desk se hat jaate hain. Sabke naak-munh aur danton se khoon nikaal
deta hai. Uske teeno dost doud kar aa jaate hain. Vahaan ka khoufnaak nazara
dekh kar chounk jaate hain. Abhay unhe peet-peet kar haanf chuka tha……..
Hanfta-hanfta apne doston ke kandhon par haath rakhta. )
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Abhay
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Jab khud dil me takleef hoti hai, “asli
dard ka pata tab hi chlta hai.”
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( Sunkar Doston kee aankhon me bhi
aansu aa jaate hain. )
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Aanchal
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( Roti hui, Abhay ke kndhe par haath
rakhti hai-)
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Abhay
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Peeche paltata hai.
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Aanchal
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( Roti hui, Bhaiya kehkar….. kas kar Seene se lag jaati hai.
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Next Part Coming Soon……. Scripts Writer Manoj Kumar WhattsApp-9805626001
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Chor
The Latest Version
Webseries Part-2
4th Scene- Lights, Camera,
Action.
Location- 1] Night Bedroom
( Raat ko andhere
me apne bistar me ghuskar Abhay, phone par apni girlfriend se dheere-dheere,
meethi-meethi baaten kar raha tha. Uski girlfriend ki sirf saari raat sirf
baaten hi sunai deti hain, dikhai sirf Abhay hi deta hai sari calling me.)
Abhay-
Kaash Tum meri hoti, to batata main tumhe.
Paayal-
( bade hi pyaar se- )
Raat ke Dedh baze aap kya bataate ?
Abhay-
Tum mujhe emotional karne ki koshish na kro. Main is vaqt emotional ho chuka
hun. Iska sara cradits sirf tumhe hi jata hai meri jaan.
Paayal-
Chal jhoothe…… tum jhooth bahut bolte ho mujhse. Tumhari baaton me to til jitni
sacchai bhi nahin hai.
Abhay-
Roz raat ke 2-2 baze sota hun, aur kya sacchai chahiye tumhe. Subah college ke
liye uthna mushkil ho jata hai, papa mujhe jagane ke liye roz kattu chodte
hain….. aur tum mere dil ko aesa bolkar
dukha rahi ho.
Paayal-
( Bade hi pyaar se kehne lagti hai…… )
baba Sorry, main jaanti hun tum mujhse bahut pyaar karte ho. Accha jaanu, Meri
Sister ka recharge karna hai 700 ka, Please-please kar doge kya…
please-please-please…
Abhay-
( Madhoshi me paagal hokar kehta hai )
Tum jab Please-Please kehti ho na, bye god……, hrdy me chidr kar deti ho. Abhi
kar deta hun, 2 din pehle tumhara bhi kiya tha na. To tumhari Sister ka
recharge kya cheez hai.
Paayal-
Abhay ji Sorry, meri Sister ke paas 2 no. hain, dono par 1400 ka recharge karna
hai.
Abhay-
( Madhoshi me paagal ho chuka tha..)
Lakhon ki sale monthly hamen apni shop me hoti hai, 1400 to kuch nahin Paayal
ji….. 15000 ka recharge bhi main kar sakta hun.
Paayal-
Aap jhooth bol rahe hain, bolne bale karte nahin hain. Agar aap karna chahte to
mere dusre number par 14000 ka recharge karva dete.
Abhay-
( Chadar faink kar khushi se choukdi maarkar, jhatt se baith jata hai, khushi
me apni gardan yahaan-vahaan hilate-hilate kehne lagta hai. )
Kro number send.
Paayal –
( Number send karke kehti hai.. )
kar diya send, par aap mujhse payaar
nahin karte hain.
Abhay –
(15000 ka recharge Google pay se kar deta hai. Roub se akad kar kehne lagta
hai-)
Hum, “vo aashiq hain jo apne sacche pyar ka example dene se, peeche kabhi nahi
hatate. Cheque Bounce karvana hamari mazburi nahin…… hamare Pyaar ki khawaish
hai.”
( Paayal ki tarf se zor se lambi kiss aati hai. )
Abhay Khushi se kaanp uthta hai. Kanpta huaa… bed par sir ke bal pichli tarf ludhkta
hua, dono taange divaar se sta kar gehri neend me so jata hai.
5th Scene- Lights, Camera,
Action-
Location- 1] Building 2] Forest
( Andheri
ghani raat me, ek chor kaale rang ke kapdon me, aur chehre par kala nkab pehne paanch-manzila
building par khada tha. Apni peeth par pehne kaale bag ko kholkar dekhta hai,
usme noton ki kai gaddhiyan thi. Gaddhiyan uthakr, choom kar vapis bag me band
karke rakh deta hai. Apne phone me Dhoom ki dhun lagakar sunne lagta hai.
Panchvi manzil se rassi pol se bandhta hai. Rassi se utar kar chouthi manzil
par pahunchta hai. Yahaan-vahaan dekhkar fir phone nikaal kar Dhoom ki dhun
sunta hai. Sunne ke baad aage jaakr, khidki ke sahare chouthi manzil par utar
jata hai. Chouthi manzil par khada hokar fir phone nikal kar, Dhoom ki dhun
sunta hai. Iske baad chouthi manzil se dusri tarf chupke-chupke jaakr, pipe se
teesri manzil par utar kar pahunchta hai. Yahaan-vahaan dekhkar dheere-dheere
building ki sedhiyon se utar kar dusri manzil par pahunchta hai….
( Neeche se
sedhiyon par se chupke-chupke Police upar chadh rahi thi.)
Chor Police ko upar aata dekhkar chounk jata hai. Vahaan se bhagkar dusri
manzil se jungle ki tarf chlaang laga deta hai. Police dusri manzil se us par
goliyaan barsaane lagti hai.Chor ghne jungle me ruk kar, Phone nikalkar Dhoom
ki dhun on karke jeb me phone daal deta hai. Peeche mudkar dekhta hai, Police
uske peeche doudi hui thi. Vo lumbi chlaang se dhoom ki dhun ke saath khaai me
girkar bhaag jata hai.
6th Scene- Lights, Camera,
Action-
Location- 1] College
( Abhay aur
Anjuman college ki chatt par akele aapas me baaten kar rahe the. )
Abhay-
Anjuman.., ab mujhe lagta hai yaar, kisi ladki ko hamen pata lena hi chahiye.
Anjuman-
( Akad kar kehta hai-)
Aa gya confidence? Iske liye kheeson me paise hone chahiye. Mere kheese har vqt
noton se bhare rehte hain. Aaj tak 2 ladkiyon ke saath setting hai, 3 saal ho gaye…
unki har khwahish ko pura karne ki himmat har pal kee hai maine.
Abhay-
( Chounk kar kehta hai- )
Bhai daka-baka hi mat daal dena kahin. Police ulta tanga-tanga kar bahut gandi-gandi jagah maarti hai.
Anjuman-
( Apne upar garv mehsus karta huaa-)
Daka to hum sirf do jaghon par marna pasnd karte hain, dusri jagah hamne kabhi
chodi nahin aur…., teesari jagah hamne kabhi choose nahin ki.
Abhay-
( Sunkar hairani
se uska munh hi band ho jata hai, kuch kehne lagta hai, lekin samjh hi nahin
aata ki kya kahe. Khada hokar college ke neeche dekhne lagta hai. Neeche kai
Students yahaan-vahaan ja rahe the. Apne man me mayusi aur udasi se sochne
lagta hai- )
Abhay-
Bhaiya sunne
ke gum se mujhe ye kabhi ubhrne nahin dega. Lagta hai Jagat bhrata hi banakar
chodega.
( Uski tarf palat kar kehne lagta hai -)
Anjuman…,
pehle to tu aesa nahin tha, huaa kya tumhe ? Kahin Dream Eleven khelna to nahin
shuru kar di.
Anjuman-
(
Baitha-baitha Aankhe band karke baahen failaye kehne lagta hai -)
Dream me to main khel raha hun lekin, lekin…… Dream Eleven me nahin.
Next part coming Soon……
Scripts Writer
Manoj Kumar
Whatsapp 9805626001
Chor
The Latest Version
webseries Part-3
7th Scene- Lights, Camera,
Action-
Location- 1] Beautiful Mountain
( Abhy apni bike
par, Shimla ki haseen vadiyon me akele khada tha. Charon aor khubsurt
pahaad-hi-pahaad the. Charon tarf prakrtik sundrta ko dekh kar….. man-hi-man
bahut khush hone lagta hai. Kuch der sundrta ke nazaare akela dekhte rehta hai.
Fir unchi khubsurat pahaadi par khada hokar, pure zor se chillane lagta hai- )
Paa…..yal I
Love You……
( Charon tarf uski aavaj gunjne lagti hai. Aavaj ko gunjta sun kar bahut hi Khushi
mehsus karne lagta hai. Fir se puri zor se
chillane shuru karta hai - )
Paa….yal
ji….. I Love You, Paayal ji aaaa…..I Love You. Main aapke bina zinda nahin reh
sakta paayal ji. Paayal ji….. aaa….i Love You. Aap mujhe nahin mili to main
yahin se kood kar mar jaaunga paayal ji. Main sach keh raha hun. Paayal ji……..
aai love You………….
8th Scene- Lights, Camera,
Action-
Location- 1] Abhay House
Kuch mahino
baad…………..
( Ghar me Abhay ke Papa, dopehar ke vqt, bahut hi gusse se Abhay ka intzaar kar
rahe the. Unki aankhon me bahut buri tarh se gussa tha. Abhay ki mammy aur
parivaar ke saare log,puri tarh se Papa ko dekh darr chuke the. Mammy darte-darte
kehne lagti hai- )
Sarojni
Ji, hamara beta ab bada ho chuka hai. Please use mariyega mat. Is umr ki maar sari umr bhar, yaad rehti hai.
Vishmaber-
( Gusse me aag-babula ho chuka tha, kehne lagta hai- ).
Tumhare nalayak ki hi harqt hai, jisne mera aaj pehli baar VP high kar
diya hai.
Sarojni-
( Bete se
daraate huye- )
ji….., aapne use aaj tak mara nahin, kabhi aapne usse unchi aavaj me baat na
ki. Aesa na ho aap use ek thappad maaren, aur mera beta aapko badle me 2
thappad gaalon par tika de.
Vishmaber-
( Uski tarf gusse se dekhta huaa - )
Tum mujhe us napunsak ki aulaad se dara rahi ho ?
Sarojni-
( Sunkar sabke saamne paani-paani ho jaati hai, sharmsaar hokar kehti hai - ) haay daiyaa…… aap parsonal baaten
bahar kyun share kar rahe hain.
Vishmaber-
( Apni kahi baat se khansi karta huaa sambhlne lagta hai- )
Please the Topic change…..
( Abhay
tabhi ghar pahunchta hai, Papa ko gusse me dekhkar dar jata hai. Dheere-dheere
jaakar apne Papa ke gaalon par jaakar
kiss karke kehta hai-)
Today’s your
Looking Daddy ji…. Very maacho man ….. I like it Daddy ji, I like it.
( dheere se kehne lagta hai -)
Aap maacho-man hain…. Is time yahaan kya kar rahe hain.
Vishmaber-
( Pure gusse
me, pure zor se uske gaalon me tamacha jadta hai. Abhay jaakar door sofe par
girta hai. Pura munh uska kaanp jata hai. Tamaache ki aavaj sab jagah sunai
deti hai. Girta hi gaal ko pakad kar kehta hai- )
Abhay-
Fans gaye ……..?
( Sarojni,
Vishmaber ko marne se rokne lagti hai. Vishmaber use ek tarf faink kar chillakar
kehta hai- )
Vishmaber-
Chup saali hijjdi…..
( jaakar tamaache-pe-tamaache Abhay ke munh par zor-zor se jadne lagta hai,
jadte-jadte kehta jata hai….. )
Saale, haraamzaade…..
teen mahino se gaadi ki emi jama karvane tu ja raha hai. Fir mere check bounce
kese ho rahe hain, kahan rakhe tune paise, bata……….
( Vishmaber-Teen
tamache aur jad deta hai, Abhay dar kar buri tarh sofe par baitha-baitha kaanp
chuka tha. )
( Saare
parivaar vaale Vishmaber ko bahon me bharkar jabrdasti rok lete hain. Sarojni
roti hui kehne lagti hai- )
Sarojni-
Aap mere Jigar ke tukde ko kamzor, aur kaayar na Samjhen…. Socho us pal ko agar
isne, jbaan haathon se 2-4 tamaache, aapke munh me abhi jad diye to kya hoga. Aapki
varson se banaai hui izzat abhi mitti me mil jayegi.
Abhay-
( Siskta huaa, apni maan ki taangon se peeche lipt jata hai. Darta huaa aur
rone ko gaya tha, kehne lagta hai- )
Mammy ji, gaal
bahut dukh rahe hain, Papa ji ne babru hi bna diye.
( Sarojni ka
man apne bete ko tadfta dekhkar pighal jata hai….. rote-rote kehne lagti hai- )
Sarojni-
Keede paden aese haathon ko, jo mere bacche ke komal gaalon par pade hain. Toot
kar bikhar jaayen aese haath…….
( Baithkar uske gaalon ko haath me lekar, foonk marte-marte…, bhare man se
kehne lagti hai-)
He bhagvaan mere laal ke gaal to bhature hi bna diye. Sirf cholon ki hi kami
hai.
9th Scene- Lights, Camera,
Action-
Location- 1] Police Station
( Police
station me Police officer se, SP Case ki file dete huye samjha rahe the. )
SP-
Ye 2 choron ki file hai,Inke naam to abhi tak malum nahin huye hain, Inke
kapdon ke pehnane ke style alg-alg hain,
ek Dark Brown kapdon me lutpaat karta hai, to dusra Dark Black kapdon me
lutpaat karta hai. Dark Brown kapdon vala chor koi shatir chor nahin lagta hai,
lekin kaale kapdon vala chor bahut hi khatrnaak hai. Is shehar ki suraksha ki
jimmedari mere kndhon par hai. Main nahin chahta ki is case me tumhari tarf se koi bhi dheel ho.
Police
Officer-
( Chaati taan kar pure zor se, pair patak kar jabab deta hai- )
Ye…..s Sir……..
( File pakad kar salyut maarkar baahr chala jata hai. )
10th Scene- Lights,
Camera, Action-
Location- 1] Night Road 2] House
( Dark Brown
kapdon me, nkab pehne, peeth par apna baig pehne chor,raat ke samy me sunsaan
jagah par, Bas ki chatt par se chalaang lagakar neeche girta hai….. Bas chali
jaati hai. Yahaan-vahaan dekhta hai, Charon tarf sunsaan pada tha. Apni jeb se
phone nikal kar Amitabh ki Don movi ka Dialog lagakar sunne lagta hai-)
Don ko
pakdna mushkil hi nahin, namukin hai…….
15 feet taron ke upar se hava me chlaang maarkar, jungle ki tarf bhaagne lagta hai,
Bhagta-bhagta time dekhne lagta hai, raat ke 12 baze the. Dheere-dheere kisi
ghar ke kamre ko kholta hai…… Charon tarf andhera chaya huaa tha. Apne sir par
lagi Light jalaata hai…… Saamne ek
bhains jugaali kar rahi thi. Peeche se koi uthakar use patak deta hai. Uske
munh se ui-amma hi niklti hai. Sir ki light us par padti hai, saamne lambe
seengo vali gaay thi. Bhains aur gaay khunton se choot jaati hain aur chor ko
apne sir se aur taangon se peetne lagti hain. Bhains aur gaay aavaj kar-kar
peetne lagti hain. Pairon samet chor par chadh jaati hain, Chor unki maar ke
dard ko apne gale me dabaye sab seh rha tha, girta-padta apni jaan bachakar
kamre se baahar nikal kar, langdata huaa bhagta hai. Gaay aur bhenson ki aavaj
sunkar gharke maalik bhi uth jaate hain, lekin unhe pata nahin chalta kya huaa
tha.
11th Scene-Lights, Camera,
Action-
Location- 1] College
( Charon
dost Abhay ke, College me uska intzaar kar rahe the. Charon apni-apni bikes par,
goldhaare me lagaye huye baithe the. Abhay samne se apni bike lakar unke saamne
laga deta hai. Utar kar sabse haath milata hai aur unke saath neeche baith jata
hai. Ek kehta hai-)
Aakash-
Kahan tha yaar week se, kahin ladki ghumane hi to nahin chala gya tha.
Abhay-
( Muskurata huaa- )
Na mere yaar, na…. Dil ke purane ghavon ka na ched…..
hoti hai badi peed….
Arz kiya hai ki……
( sabhi kehte hain, vah-vah,vah-vah-vah)
Dil ke purane ghavon ka na ched, hoti hai badi peed….. thode
se paison ka tanka kya laga liya,
ki……. Thode se paison ka tanka kya lgaliya,
Bedardi se Papa ji ne diya Charon tarf cheer…… Charon tarf se cheer…….
( Vah-vah,vah-vah,
vah-vah, vah-vah ki aavaj gunj padti hai. )
Anjuman-
( anadr se khushi baahar nikalta huaa kehta hai -)
Isi baat par to party banti hai…..
Aese mouke baar-baar nahin milte, vo din gye jab raat-raat bhr Partiyaan ka
intzaar karna padta tha. Ye to khushi ka vo mouka hai jo varson baad milta hai.
( Abhay ko baithe-baithe hi uske friends, Khushi-khushi use kandhon par
bithakar, college ki canteen ki tarf le jaate hain….
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12th Scene- Lights,
Camera, Action-
Location- 1] Bank 2] House Room
( Abhay Bank
me gaadi ki emi jama karvaane khada tha, uske aage ek uncle khade the. Abhay ki
achanak nazar, cashier ki key board par….. chalti ungliyon par padti hai. Bade
dhyaan se Key board par uski chalti ungliyaan dekhne lagta hai. Apne ghar me
jaakar raat me yahi sochne lagta hai, uske khyaalon me sirf cashier ki ungliyan
hi aa rahin thi. Uthkar apne Laptop ko kholkar on karta hai, fir cashier ki saari
harqat ko dhyan me yaad karke, Laptop chlaane lagta hai. Dekhte-hi-dekhte Bank
me, apne se aage bale uncle ke khaate ko open kar deta hai. Khushi se pagal ho
uthta hai. Freez se Sprite nikaal kar peene lagta hai. Apne aap se baith kar kehne
lagta hai-)
Abhay-
Hackers banna to bahut aasan hai.
( Apni passbook nikalkar table par rakhta hai. Jab paise transfer karne lagta hai
tab chounk jata hai, kehta hai- )
Abhay-
Sirf hazaar rupey. Ye bhi kya koi balance hai.Chalo, hazaar hi sahi. Ye koun se
mere hain. Meri Paayal darling ji, tumhare liye main khushiyon ki jhadi laga dunga.Tumhare
liye to main, tumhare parivaar ke saare recharge har mahine karva sakta hun.
13th Scene- Lights,
Camera, Action-
Location- 1] Night Bedroom
( Raat ko chaddar
me ghuskar, Paayal se meethi-meethi baaten kar raha tha. Paayal ki sirf aavaj
hi sunai de rahi thi…. Aur Abhay baat karta-karta dikhai de raha tha. )
Abhay-
Ek baat bolun …..
Paayal-
Haanji bolo na aap……, 2 baat bolo ?
Abhay-
Aaj tak mujhse kisi bhi ladki ne call par, aadhe ghante se jyada baat na ki, kyonki
unhen main boring lagta tha. Aap hi bolo…, kya main boring hun.
Paayal-
( Bade Pyaar se kehti hai-)
Hamen, “boring boy pasnd hain.”
Abhay-
( Bahut khush hota hai, bade pyar se kehne lagta hai-)
Kaash kuch ladkiyon ki soch tumhare jaise pavitr hoti……. Aur batao main, main
tumhare liye kya kar sakta hun.
Paayal-
Bata dungi aapko…., ab batao milna kab , 4 mahino se hum phone par hi baaten kar
rahe hain.
Abhay-
( Chounk jata hai, sochne lagta hai-)
Aesa na ho kahin ye bhi hamari customer nikle, Discount ke laalach me bhaiya bolkar
chali jaye.
( Us se baat sambhal kar kehne lagta hai- )
Mil, mil lenge Paayal ji, itni jaldi bhi kya hai. Main to soch raha hun, 4 kar mahine
aur phone par meethi-meethi baaten kar lete hain. Iske baad milna to… hai hi….
14th Scene- Lights,
Camera, Action-
Location- 1] House 2] Cow House
( Abhay college se
ghar aata hai. Darvaja band karke, andar aata hai. Tabhi uske Papa Vishmaber, peeche
se gusse me jump maar kar uski peeth par baith jaate hain. )
Abahy-
( darr kar chillata hai-)
mammy bachao, mammy bachao…
( Sarojni Kitchan se doudti hai-)
Sarojni -
kya huaa mere laal, kya huaa……
Abhay-
( Darta huaa chillakar kehta hai-)
Mammy ji-mammy ji, meri peeth par koi, badbudaar jaanwar hai. Aese lag raha hai
jaise koi Suar sad kar mar gaya ho.
( Vishmaber ke bhaar se Abhay dab kar neeche pet ke gir jata hai.Vishmaber use ulta
pade-pade mukkon se peetata-2 kehta hai-)
Vishmaber-
Haramzade kya kami hai hamari parvarish me.Tu apni harqton se baaz nahin aayega.
( Sarojni,
roti hui chudane lagti hai. )
Sarojni-
Aap Abhay ko kyun maar rahe hain. Koi baat nahin, agar ek check aur bounce ho
gya to.
Vishmaber-
Check tak to theek tha.
( Laat maar-maar kar, ghar se baahar le jaata hai. )
Puch apni aulaad
se, isne kya kiya hai.
Abhay-
( Rota huaa kehta hai- )
Maine kuch nahin kiya Papa ji. Aapka beta hun, Bail nahin…. Jra dheere maaro.
Sarojni-
( Gire pade bete ko bahon me bhar leti hai. Fatkaaren de-dekar bolne lagti hai.)
Keede paden un haathon ko jo mere laal par uthe hon, taange kat kar alag ho
jayen, jo tànge mere laal ki pasliyon par padi hon.
Vishmaber-
( Pada huaa bada danda uthakr, ek sadppa maan ko rakhta jata hai…, dusra sadppa
Abhay ko rakhta jata hai. Dono par sadppon ki ek barobar jhadi laga deta hai )
( Maan-bete chillate
huye dono, gaushala me chip jate hain. Ghar ke baaki log bhi ikkathe ho gye
the. Vishmaber, dono ke sir ek hi okhli me daba kar dono ko jaan se maarne lagta
hai. Vishmaber ka bhai Vishnu aakar use peeche kheench kar, kehta hai- )
Vishnu-
Maar dega, huaa kya….., beta hai tera.
Vishmaber-
( Aankhen bhar aati hain.. )
Bhaiya.. Hraamzaade ne kahin munh dikhane
ke kabil nahin choda mujhe. Ye Logon ke ghar-ghar jaakr bhainson ka doodh churata
hai, Ye logon ki tijoriyan saaf kar unke paise udata hai.
( Sara
parivaar chounk jata hai. )
( Abhay, Ye sunkar dar ke maare Okhli me hi ghus kar chipne lagta hai.)
Vishmaber-
( Gusse me -)
Aur to aur ab ye, Chor ka Latest Version ban kar accounts hack kar na bhi seekh
gya hai. Iske kamre se Police ko 2 nakabposh Suit baramad huye hain, Police
iska andar hi intzaar kar rahi hai.
Vishnu-
( Gusse me
aag babula ho chuka tha, Kehta hai…..) Tu bhabhi ki haddiyan tod, main bhateeje ki todta hun.
( Dono bahut
buri tarh Sarojni aur Abhay ki haddiyan todte hain. )
Abhay-
(chillata rehta hai )
Nahin taauji, nahin taauji…. Bahut lag rahihai.
( Vishnu use laaton se gaushala ki kuni me maar-maar kar suza deta hai.)
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15th Scene- Lights,
Camera, Action-
Location- 1] Bank 2] House 3] Forest 4] Night Road
( Vishmaber
ne apne ghar me hi adhmara kar Abhay ko, uske hi room me chat se baandh kar
latkaya huaa tha. Aadhi Raat ko use hosh aane lagti hai. Hosh me aakar apne
haath ek dum se kholkar neeche, frsh par bina aavaj kiye girta hai. Apne chori
ke dono kapde nikaal kar dekhne lagta hai. Black dress daalkar tedha-tedha apne
kamre ki chat se neeche kudta hai… tedha-tedha jungle ki tarf nikal padta hai,
phone nikalkar Dhoom ki dhun laga deta hai aur aage chal padta hai. Dard ke
maare usse chala nahin ja raha tha.Lekin fir bhi himmat nahin chodta hai. Shehar
pahunchne ke baad ek unche ped par chadh jata hai, Apna laptop nikal kar bank
ke cameras aur security Sestam ko hack kar leta hai. Neeche jump maarkar utrta
hai.., Dheere-dheere soye huye security guard ko rumaal sunghakar behosh kar
deta hai. Bank ki tizori loot kar baig bhar leta hai. Baig ka munh kholkar
dekhne lagta hai….
Abhay-
Paayal ji….. hum ab saari umr Aish se jiyenge. Aapke kadmon me main khushiyon
ki jhadi laga dunga. Tumhare liye to main Dhoom ke saare records tod dunga.
( Apna phone
nikal kar Dhoom ki dhun sunne lagta hai. )
( Tabhi
peeche se Police aakar use Hands up karne ko kehti hai. )
( Abhay
dheere-dheere unki tarf mudkar baig apni peeth se lagakar, Dhoom ki dhun ko aur
zor se karta hai, aur sofe ke upar se jump maarkar, khidki ka kanch todkar
baahar bhaag jaata hai. Bike start karke bahagta hai. Aage-aage bike par Abhay
tha peeche-peeche dusri bikes par Police vaale the. Police bheeshan goliyon ki
aavaj me Abhay ka peecha kar rahi thi.
( Subah
Vishmaber, darvaja kholta hai…)
Abhay chat se vaise hi rassiyon se, behoshi
ki haalat me latka tha.
16th Scene- Lights, Camera,
Action-
Location- 1] College Campus
( College me
Abhay ke Friends ped ke neeche baithkar baaten ker rahe the.)
Anjuman-
Aaj pta nahin Abhay college kyun nahi aaya. Aaj ek ladki ko uske saath purpose
karne jana tha.
Nishant-
Kal Bank me bahut badi chori hui hai. Kya tum sabko malum hai.
Aakash-
Hone de hame kya lena hai.
Anjuman-
Pehle nashe ki lat ki dehshat thi. Ab suna hai shehar me 2 choron ki dehshat hai.
Aakash-
Jab har Government job Private thekedaron ke under jayegi, kisi ka bhi chor
banna to natural hai. Jobs ka the end aur berojgaari shuru.
Nishant-
Aesa hai aane vala hamara future, kahin hame bhi chor hi na banna pade. Jis
Government noukari ko paane ke liye hum mehnat kar rahe hain, Agar aane vale
samay me vo government job hi nahi rahi to.
( Sabhi ke
chehron par udasi cha jaati hai. )
Anjuman-
Har Students ka future, gehre andhere me kho jayega.Ye to ek full stop hai
hamare future par.
17th Scene- Lights, Camera
Action-
Location- 1] Abhay House
( Abhay ki
maan doodh ka bda gilaas, aur 6 pranthe lekar, langdaati hui Abhay ke room me
aati hai. Sarojni se chla bhi nahin ja raha tha, badi mushkil se chal rahi thi.
Abhay ko dekhti hai. Abhay chat se bndha-bndha so gya tha. Abhay ke papa aur chacha
paani ka gilaas lekar aate hain. Uski rassiyon ko khol kar neeche utarte hain.
Uske munh par Paani marte hain, use dheere-dheere hosh aane lagti hai. Abhay
teeno ki tarf dekhkar darr jata hai. Khane ki thaali par uski nazar padti hai.
Tedha-tedha uthkar Chup-chap paranthe khane lagta hai. Khata-khata kehne lagta
hai. )
Abhay-
Papa ji, aapne to kaha tha andar Police hai.
Vishmaber-
( Payaar se uske sir par haath ferkar kehne lagta hai- )
Tu kaleja hai mera, tujhe Police ke havale karunga main….. Maine to jhooth bola
tha ki Police andar baithi hai.
Vishnu-
( Aankhe bhar aati hain- )
Jab tu bachpan me shaitaniyan karta tha na, to tera ye chaha tere sare ilzaam
apne sir le leta tha. Tu bta ye sab gnnde kaam kyu karta hai, Choriyaan kyun
karta hai tu…… main tujhse itna pyar karta hun, tera ye ilzaam bhi apne sir le
lunga, Bta kyun karta hai ye sab.
Abhay-
( Sun kar ankhen aansuon se bhar aati hain. Ek nazar sabki tarf dekhta hai.
Sabke chehre rone ko ho gye the. Apni bhari aavaj me kehne lagta hai. )
Papa ji, main Shop me nahin baithna chahta.
Sarojni-
( Bade laad-pyaar se puchkarte huye aur garv se kehne lagti hai- )
Mera beta… kya Dhoom Next Series nikalne vala hai. I am Proud of you. Dekha
kaise Aamir khaan Dhoom me chori karta hai. Bete chori karna sekhni ho to Aamir
khaan se sekhna. Film ke end tak kisi ke haath nahin aata hai.
( Vishmaber
gusse me aape se baahar hone vala tha.., Vishnu harani se dekh raha tha ki uski
bhabhi seekh kya de rahi hai. )
Sarojni-
( Pyaar se chehre par haath fairti hui, aur garv mehsus karti hui kehne lagti
hai…. )
Mere bete aajakl choron ka jamana nahin raha hai.
( Abhay bade
chaav se maan ki baaten sun raha tha, aur Paraanthe kha raha tha.)
Sarojni –
Aajakl Hackers ka jamana hai, ek bahut hi mast movie hai Hollywood ki, jiske
5-6 parts hain. Har Parts me Hacking ke jabrdast tareeke bataye huye hain. Naam
to mujhe yaad nahin aa raha hai, lekin tu Google par search maar lena.
Abhay-
( Masumiyat se kehta hai-)
Thanks maa, mujhe spot karne ke liye, 2 Paraanthe aur laogi…
Sarojni-
Abhi laai mere laal.
Vishmaber-
( Pure gusse me, gardan aur kamar se pakad kar apni bibi ko, khidki se neeche
faink deta hai. Sarojni chilati hui khidki ka kaanch faadkar 2 manjila neeche
paani ke tab me chapaak kar girti hai. Abhay ki tarf pure gusse me ghumta hai, Abhay
darr kar kaanpta huaa deaavar ke kinaron se jaakar sat gya tha.)
Vishmaber-
( Pure gusse me kehta hai……)
Kyun Kiya tune ye sab ?
Abhay-
( Masumiyat se ghabrata aur kaanpta hua kehne lagta hai. )
Papa ji……, Papa ji, bahut dukh hota hai jab koi ladki Shop me aakar bhaiya ji,
bhaiya ji kehne lagti hai.
( Rota huaa kehne lagta hai…)
Papa ji, usse bhi jyada dukh tab hota hai, jab…… koi ladki, meri girlfriend
Bani ho aur, discount, discount ke lalach, me mujhe bhaiya-bhaiya kehkar chali
jaye.
Vishnu-
Tujhe shrm nahin aa rhai…
Abhay-
( Rota huaa- ).
Aap to budhe ho chuke ho, aapki samjh se bahar hai ye baaten. Mujhe lagta hai
aap dono ki umr nikal chuki hai, aapko meri baaten samjh nahin aa rahi hain.
Main Shop me nahin baithna chahta.
Vishmaber-
( Gala sukh jata hai, thodi der soch kar kehta hai-)
Ye mudda bake me hi ganbheer hai. Chal mat baithna….., lekin ye bta tu chori
kyun karta hai ?
Abhay-
( Uske chehre par khushi aane lagti hai-)
Aapki bahu ke liye, Paayal se main bahut pyaar karta hun. Main Paayal ke
kharche uthane ke liye chor bana hun.
Vishmaber-
( Gusse se hairani me- )
Paayal ke liye tune laakhon ki Choriyaan ki ?
Abhay-
( Rone ko munh ho jata hai- )
kitni girlfriends banai maine, sab-ki-sab discount ke lalach me bhaiya ji bolti
gayi, lekin khrcha to vo bhi karvati hi thin. Aap Paayal se meri shaadi
karvaao……. Nahin to kahin aesa na ho Dhoom ki Next Series mujh par hi bane.
Mere dil ka dard aap dono nahin samjh sakte.
( Papa aur
chacha dono chup ho jaate hain, thodi der soch kar kehte hain……)
Vishmaber-
Tu shop me ab kabhi bhi mat baithna…..,
jee le apni marzi ki jindgi, aur Le aa Paayal ko, karte hain tere haath
peele. Agar paayal dikhne me kaali bhains aur sadi hui kutiya ki tarah bhi hogi
na…… to bhi teri shaadi usse kara denge.
18th Scene- Lights, Camera
Action-
Location- 1] College Room 2] Abhay House
( 6 mahine
baad ………. )
( Abhy apne
Charon doston ke saamne college room me dahaaden maar-maar kar ro raha tha. Dost
use chup karaane ki koshish kar rahe the, lekin chup nahi ho rhaa tha. Kabhi ek
dost ki chaati par sir patk raha tha, to kabhi dusre dost ki chaati par sir
patke ja raha tha, Aur zor se dahaaden maar kar rone lagta hai. Dono haath
muthiyaan banakar doston ke seene par marne lagta hai.
( Aese dahaad raha tha use dekhkar hi hansi choote ja rahi thi.)
Dost use uske ghar pahuncha dete hain. Uska sara parivaar use rota huaa dahadta
dekh kar ikktha ho jata hai. Maan use baahon me bhar kar bolti hai-
Sarojni-
( Aankhon me aasun aa gaye the. ).
Kya huaa mere laal, tu ro kyun raha hai.
Abhay-
( Maa ki chaati par dahaaden maar-maar kar rone lagta hai. )
Maa main kahin ka nahin raha. Mujhe koi advice de maa, Advice de maa…Tera laal
saari umr ab baap na ban jayega.
Sarojni-
( Gusse me, behte aansuo ke saath apne pati ko fatkaar lagakar kehti hai-) Pad gai
aapke kaleje me thandak. Aapne mere bete ka apni tarh Operation hi kara diya
na.
Abhay-
( Gusse se-)
( Sunkar zameen par patak kar aur zor se dahaaden maar-maar rone lagta hai.)
Sarojni-
( Aansuon ke saath , Abhay ko chup karvane lagti hai -)
Na mere laal, na… mujhe malum hai opretion ka dard…..
Vishmaber-
Iska matlab tu Paayal se milkar aaya hai.
Abhay-
( Masumiyat se haan me rota huaa sir halata hai )
Vishmaber-
( Harani se kehne lagta hai- )
Paayal ki beauty…… Black hai….,. Kahin Paayal kaali-kaluti to nahin hai.
Abhay-
( Baitha-baitha aasmaan ki tarf dono haath karke zor se rota huaa dahadta hai.
Sisk-sisk kar kehne lagta hai- )
Papa ji……., Jis Ladki ke liye maine, choriyan ki, Hackers bna, Bank lute….., vo
ek ladka tha.
( Sabhi chounk
jaate hain, sabki aankhe khuli-ki-khuli reh jaati hain. )
Abhay-
( Zor se dahaad maar kar rota hai. Rote-rote kehne lagta hai… ) Mammy ji Paayal mujhe raat ko phone par, 2-2 baze tak jagaye rakhti thi.
( Vishmaber
aur Vishnu ki zor se hansi, choot aati hai. Uske dost apni hansi ko jabardasti
munh me dabaye huye the. )
Abhay-
Papa ji…….., na jaane kitni hi kissiyaan aur chimmiyan mujhe raat-raat bhar
deti rehti thi.
( Sarojni darr kar khadi ho jaati hai. Vishmaber ki hansi cantrol se baahar ho
rahi thi, Abhay ki tarf peeth karta huaa…… hansi se neeche gir padta hai. )
Sarojni-
( Uske rote huye aansuon ko ponchte huye kehne lagti hai. )
Na mere laal….. tujhe galat fehmi hui hogi, koi ladka, kisi ladke se raat-raat
bhar jaag-jaag kar kya baaten kar saktaa hai.
Abahy-
( Sun kar pure zor se dahaad maarkar rota huaa saari nights ki yaaden yaad
karne lagta hai. )
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