Wednesday, August 21, 2019

19] Story written on top of Addiction


Aesi Kahani hai jo hamari zindgi, ke aas-paas ya pados me kahin bhi aapko dikhati mehsoos ho jayegi. Is kahani ko isliye likha gaya hai ki jab aap ise padhen to jo shiksha aapko ise padhne ke baad mile, us shiksha ko aap auron me bhi baant saken.


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My Low Budget Scripts
{ Raat ka vaqt tha, Nisha andar jal rahi thi- mammy bachao, Mammy-Rohit bachao bachao…… Sari jal rarahi thi. Bahar pados ke log ikkthe ho rahe the.. Lekin koi andar jane ki himmat nahin kar raha tha tabhi 6 saal ka Rishu rota huaa bahar aata hai aur kehne lagta hai- meli mammy ko bacha lo, meri mammy ko bacha lo,  mere papa ne meri mammy to jala diya.
Log andar jate hi kambl aur chadron se aag ko bujhane ki koshish karne lagte hain, kafi prytno ke thodi der baad,  hospital me Nisha ko pahuncha dete hain.. }

Prthvi- Apni team ke sath hospital pahunchta hai… doctor tab jakar ilaaj shuru karte hain, thoda samay beet jata hai…
[ Rishu ka nana Ajeet Bilkhta, huaa andar aata hai. ]
Ajeet- [ Rishu nanu ki tangon se rota huaa lipt jata hai–] Utha leta hai
Rishu- Nanu papa ne mammy ko jala diya, kaha dusri mammy layenge acche bali.
Doctor- Sorry, agar vaqt rehte aap inhe le aate to shayad inhe bachane me hum kaamyaab ho jate… shareer sara jal chukka hai………
Ajeet- Aankhon se dharadhar aansu behne lagte hain.
{ 3 maheene baad- Ajeet bageeche me Rishu ko godi me liye betha kitaab padh raha tha aur cigrate ke kash pe kash lagaye ja raha tha, Rishu maze se dhunae ke sath khele ja raha tha… }

Rishu- Nanu mujhe lag raha hai main badlon ki sair kar raha hun.
Ajeet- Nanu ki godi me itna hi maza aata hai, aapke nanu jo kash lagate hain na bo badal ban kar udte hain, aap to roz baadlon ki sair karte hain… jo acche bacche hote hain bo, morning walk bhi nanu ki godi me hi karte hain.
Rishu- Main andar jaaun
Ajeet- Kyun, godi me maza nahin aa raha hai.
Rishu- Nahin mujhe andar jana hai.
Ajeet- Pappi dekar jaao…. meethi-2 pehle.

Rishu- Darbaja andar se band kar deta hai, music system on karta hai- Honey Singh ka traans on karta hai, Shokeens movie ka - full sound me…..
Rishu- Cigrate nikalta hai pocket se– later se jalata hai, kash par kash lagane lagata hai, traans ke style par dance karne lagta hai…. pure traans ke douraan
2-cigraten pee jata hai- lagbhag 7 minutes tak dance karta rehta hai,Full dance.
Rishu- School me pakda-pakdaai khel raha tha, tabhi achanak use chakkar aane lagta hai, chakkar khakar gir jata hai, Bacche ikkthe ho jate hain.
Peon- uthakar claasroom me le aata hai. Teacher pani ke cheente deta hai aur hosh aane ke baad pani pilane lagata hai.
[ Ajeet Principal room me pahunch jata hai.]
Ajeet- Rishu ko, ghabrata huaa apni godi me utha leta hai.
Teacher- Aap Rishu ko acche se doctor ke paas dikhaiye, is bacche ki tabiyat jara bhi theek nahin rehti hai class me. Aaj to had ho gayi, Khelta-khelata achanak behosh ho gaya.
Ajeet- Ji, main aaj hi dhikhata hun.
Principal- Dr. Vikas se aap contact kariye, main bhi apni beti ko unse hi davai leta hun. Accha experience hain unhe, bacchon ke specialist doctor hain vo. Ye unka card hai. Meri mane to aap unke paas hi jaayen.
Ajeet- Ji… Thanks, Main jata hun, Rishu ko lekar aaj hi….

Dr. Vikas- Rishu ka check up kar raha tha….. x-ray leta hai, khoon test karta hai. rishu ki tarf dekhata hai muskurata huaa.
Ajeet- Dr. Sahab Rishu theek hai na bilkul.
Dr. Vikas- Kal Rishu ki report milegi, aap kal aaiye, kuch nahin…  ghabrane bali baat nahin hai.

Rohit- Jail me betha soch raha tha…. Nisha tum mujhe is duniya me akela chodkar kyun chali gai, itni si galti ki tumne mujhe itni badi saja di, kash main tumhari baat maan leta, to shayad aaj tumhara sath to mujhse nahin chutata. Aankhe bhar aati hain.

Ajeet- [ report lene pahunchta hai ] Good afternoon Dr. Sahab, sorry, main 4 din pehle report lene aa nahin saka bo jaruri kaam ad gaya tha.
Dr .Vikas- Bethiye  Rishu ko……..,  Dekhiye sambhaliye apne aap ko, Aapko bacche ka din-raat dhyaan rakhna hoga. Ye dhyaan rakhiye ki baccha, kisi bhi dhunae ke nazdik na jaaye. Sorry, voh Rishu ko, Blood Cancer hai.
Ajeet- [ Chounk jata hai, sun kar hill jata hai ] kya.
Dr.Vikas- Ye uski 1st stege hai. Mujhe ye samjh nahin aa raha, 6 saal ke bacche ko ye blood cancer….. iski reports se to yahi pata chala jo insaan aajivan dhumrpaan karta hai uski reports aesi aati hain, jesi reports Rishu ki aayi hain. Rishu ka aap pura dhayaan  rakhiye.
Ajeet- Hara huaa ghar aata hai, andar ka nazara dekh-kar dang reh jata hai.
Rishu- Shokeens ke Usi traans par kash-pe-kash lagaye ja raha tha aur sundar dumdaar dance kiye ja raha tha, nashe me madhosh hokar.
Ajeet- Aankhon se dharadhar aansu behne lagte hain, hath ki cigrate chut jati hai. Rishu- Mast hokar dance karta rehta hai, Madhosh nashe me, pure dance ke baad jab nanu par nazar padti hai, chounk jata hai. Cigrate dar ke mare faink deta hai. Payari si smile deta hai maasumiyata ke sath.
Ajeet- Toot kar ghutne ke bal gir jata hai, hath se report chut jati hai.
Rishu- [ Bhaag kar uske seene se lag jata hai-] Nanu mere bhi bade-bade badal ban rahe hain.
Ajeet- [ Rota huaa kehta hai-] Bete tumhara gunehgaar sirf main hun. Ye saza tumhe nahin mujhe di hai bhagvan ne.

Ajeet- Rishu ko godi me uthaye Inspector Prthvi aur SP Ajay  ke sath, havalaat me Rohit se milne aata hai.
Rishu- Papa kehta huaa Rohit ke seene se lag jata hai.
[ Yaad aane lagti hai ]
Andar Nisha aur Rohit lad rahe the- Rishu darvaaje  ke peeche khada sab sun raha tha, jisse dono anjaan the.
Nisha- Maine aaj chup kar Rishu ko aapki cigrate peete huye dekha, bo sirf 5 saal ka hai, abhi se bo peene lag pada hai- sochiye bo aage kya karegaa.
Rohit- Cigrate chudbane ka aur koi bahana nahin mila tumhe.
Nisha- Main sach keh rahi hun bahana nahin laga rahi hun, Rohit tumhare cigrate peene  ka bahut bura asar pad raha hai Rishu par.
Rohit- Haan, shaadi se pehle to tum bahut sare lips kiss deti thi, jor-jor se lambe bale, aur ab kehti ho, kis leni hai to brush karke aao. us vaqt to tumhe mere munh se aati cigrate ki baas bhi sent ki mehak lagti thi.
Nisha- Aap samjh nahin rahe hain, bo baat nahin hai…. Agar aapko cigrate peeni hi hai to chup kar bhi pee sakte hain, lekin Rishu ke samne kyun peete ho.
Rohit- Rishu ek mard ka beta hai, Mardon bale shouk usme bachpan se hi hain.
Sher ke bacche ko shikaar karna sikhana nahin padta, uske khoon ki  boond-2 me shikaar ka tevar bhara hota hai, samjhi. Tum jana chahti ho to jaao, Rishu ke liye main nayi mammy le aaunga.
Rishu- Maasumiyat se sab sune ja raha tha.
Rohit- Pichle darvaaje se baahar chala jata hai gusssa hokar.
[ jiska pata Nisha ko nahin chalta ]
Nisha- Mitti ke tel ki keni gusse me uthaati hai aur apne upar pura udhelti jati hai. keni dur fank deti hai, tum aese nahin maanoge mujhe aag hi laga do, fir tum bhi khush aur main bhi khush,bistar par dhadaam se so jati hai naraz hokar pet ke bal.

Rishu- Thodi der ki khamoshi ke baad-darvaaje ke peeche se ghutno ke bal niklta hai, tebal par rakhi cigrate aur machis uthata hai, chupke-2 vese hi cigrate jalata hai tili fank deta hai aur darvaaje ke peeche  jakar kash lagane lagta hai. Tili aag pakad leti hai, jakar bistar par, aur leti Nisha ko jakad leti hai. Jalan se cheekhne lagti hai Nisha, sisk-2 kar jalti hai.. sare kamre me aag fail jati hai.

Ajeet- [ Rota huaa-]  Rohit bete Nisha ko jalaane bala ye baccha nahin hai, asli gunehgaar tum ho aur main bhi hun. Bhagvaan ne iski saja hum dono ko ye di…., Is nanhi si jaan ko bloodcancer  hai.
Rohit- Rohit aansuon ke sath chounk uthta hai.
[ Sabki aankhen ye sun kar tar ho jati hain. ]
Rohit seene se lagakar bahut rota hai.



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Shiksha:- Ye kahani un logon ke liye hai jinhone apni saari jindgi nashe me Khokar bita di hoti hai. Nasha jinke liye Nasha na hokar ek aadat ban chuki hoti hai. Aesa Nasha karne vaalon ko Iski sajaa kabhi-kabhi aesi milti hai jo kisi ne apne sapne me bhi nahin sochi hoti hai.

Manoj ScriptsWriter
Nasha kitna ghaatak ho sakta hai ye to aap samjh hi gaye honge. Bachpan ek kora kagaj hota hai, is par jo aap likh denge bo hi sari umr ke liye chap jayega. Mana aap beedi-cigrate nahin chod sakte, lekin itna to kar sakte hain inhe bacchon se chupakar peeyen, taki aapke bacchon ko kabhi Smoking ki lat na lage. Ye Script 2 march 2015 me likhi gayi hai.
  



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